I really enjoyed looking at your work. You have shown a good understanding of the project and explored different ways to express your ideas. Your sketchbook pages look very creative and full of energy. I like how you experimented with colour and texture in your drawings, especially the mix of soft watercolour shapes and detailed lines. It gives a nice feeling of movement and emotion.
It is clear that you have tried many materials and techniques. I think this helps make your work look more interesting and personal. The way you cut out and layered some pieces also adds depth and makes the page more dynamic.
I think you have really understood what was asked in this task and have explored your ideas in a playful and experimental way. I especially like the drawing where you used bright colours and fluid shapes — it feels very expressive. Maybe next time you could add a bit more focus on contrast or composition to make some parts stand out more. Overall, it’s clear you have put a lot of thought and time into your work, and I really enjoyed seeing how you developed your ideas.
——Michelle
3rd November 2025 @ 5:19 pm
I really enjoyed looking at your work. You have shown a good understanding of the project and explored different ways to express your ideas. Your sketchbook pages look very creative and full of energy. I like how you experimented with colour and texture in your drawings, especially the mix of soft watercolour shapes and detailed lines. It gives a nice feeling of movement and emotion.
It is clear that you have tried many materials and techniques. I think this helps make your work look more interesting and personal. The way you cut out and layered some pieces also adds depth and makes the page more dynamic.
I think you have really understood what was asked in this task and have explored your ideas in a playful and experimental way. I especially like the drawing where you used bright colours and fluid shapes — it feels very expressive. Maybe next time you could add a bit more focus on contrast or composition to make some parts stand out more. Overall, it’s clear you have put a lot of thought and time into your work, and I really enjoyed seeing how you developed your ideas.
——Michelle